Guilty Of Chryme
From: In Your Nightmares. |
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IP:
Dope shyt..
You used nyce vocab, and the piece flowed well.
I liked the concept..
If anything, I think this line coulda been worded better:
to stop her everlasting excruciating sadness
I kinda foresaw the end comin out to be like that but still dope.. 8/10, stay up.
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