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Old 08-09-05, 04:49 PM   #16
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Harsh... but in many area's i agree.. i think Tweety shows alot of potential.. he just needs to work harder on his pieces.. and not be soo forceful with it.. it sounds soo rushed.. just let it flow.. and u can slim down the vocab.. just put alot of emotion in ur piece man.. i know u can do this shit.. just pick it up a bit.. overall decent piece 6/10
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