good OM drakel. the flow was good but sketchy sometimes. so work on that. your topic was sorta original but dealt with well. u had some good imagery and emotion throughout it. you impressed me on this one, being as its one of the first things ive enjoyed that uve written. good drop. the rhyming was good, sometimes forced but it flowed well. so good job on that also. keep dropping and hit up my OM White Flag.

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