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IP:
very good piece you two, really liked it, flow and structure were good, liked the story line, can't wait to read the other two parts, imagery and emotion were good also, keep it up
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i come from a time when you earned respect,
for your rhyme and the way you made words connect,
not the money that you made or the girls you sexed,
a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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