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Old 08-10-05, 01:19 AM   #12
taz
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Voted For: Reflekt

STRUCTURE-BOTH had choppy structure....ya'll needa make each line end at the same place gives it better flow.both up on that

Vocab-Niether had good vocab biggest word was propostion, so i obviously wont count this catergory...didnt see much...again both up on vocab fo real as ur verse goes along enhance the vocab to make it more enjoyable to read...

Personals-Reflekt, you had a couple good personals that caught my eye Young montanna had a played line that ive seen like 4 times today about christopher reeve.....so thats played...didnt hit hard....up on that yo

Pucnhes-Reflekt......had good punches dissed him hard.....young montanna had ok punches but didnt hit as hard as reflekt.....when you throw a punch make sure ur actually throwing it at your opponent....up on that

Multis-Both really had little multis if that.....cant say much in this catergorie niether.....both need to up on multis so u can enhance ur flow/verse

Originality-Reflekt had a more fresh verse that stood out more with creativity and good hard punches nice job...u earned the win!.....

v/REFLEKT

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