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Old 08-10-05, 06:39 AM   #3
Tha Q.
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Originally Posted by Ysdat
dope like soap on a rope.(im such a good whymer)



^^let' see


Dope...does rhyme with soap...and rope does rhyme with dope

but you misspelled rhymer

and the imagery of soap on a rope suggests things hanging...and I don't think you want that forum hanging, do you?


further more, your flow was off a little tinny bit...and try to use more metas


overall, I'd rate that a 6/10



RTV please
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