Voted For: NaRc-UzI
Dawg beatz on newbs, rec full ov ''smoking herbs'' lyke bob Marley
N.U iz gangsta?...he aint never ''ridin'' lyke wheelchair patients on a Harley
a played concept but u couldve worded it better
yuh flowz cant harm-me, if u try ''droppin bombs''..i'll find a shelter
bitch nigga..........ya raps iz stinkin!....even blind men aint ''felt-ya''
now this is played =\...gotta start bringin that fire man
nobody smelt-ya, ur rhymes iz slept on like a dirty matress
u can call me director da way i ''take shots'' @ diz actor
again not bad...but wording still needs work!
i'll subtract-ya metahpours, brake 'em into two'z, u LOSE-G
Got diz Narc wannabe woozy when i clap with the UZI
good at all
u need alot more than ur skill 2 move-me, I'm built lyke a lyrical rock
u'd think diz lame rhymerz a BIRD....Cuz ov da way he always gettin ''Mocked''
i liked it
i'm prepeared for WAR, Got da real fam behind me, Leave u SORE
check ur profile..u love us so damn much, U STILL THINK UR REPPIN RAW!
okay personal..not worded well though
Fuck diz i'ma go out Hardcore, while narc stayz catchin Nutz!
C'mon dawg..
Why u mad 4?...It aint my fault u aint RAW Enuff 2 avoid da cutz!
self glorifying..not good
lyrical slut, u step 2 any talent & ''back down'' quicker than Pole Dancers
if u ever got signed....
.........u'd prolly blow it all, & buy ghost writers wit ur advances!
noooo. bad closer man
Kaoz - Your verse wasnt horrible like some of the verses in FL. You had some cool concepts but you need to work on wording them better. A couple of yor punches hit hard and that got you some points. Flow was alright, a little stretched sometimes though. So keep working on it, not a bad verse.
This bitch is not gifted if he was crack not even a crack whore would be addicted
Lets be serious he has a lesser chance of beating me than a landlord getting evicted
not a bad meta. good line
Khaoz must be an Armless father cause he could never really seem to hold His Own
In his profile it says that Living Legends are his crew but he says that RAW is his home
not a punch...t'was a statement!
Homie im able to bring alot to the table while spitting fire like an erupting volcano
Khaoz is not a smart ass cuz he give alot of brain but he also demands alot of anul
lol wordplay was nice. impressed me here
Batteling me whats the purpose the only way youll win is if god switched the verses
Your like a gothic person praying in churches cause like his prayers you are worthless
na, bad metaphore.
You dont have to fear me but when i come to RAWs forum and chat you better take it EASY
I would smack your ass if u come near me cause you bringing KHAOZ homie is just a THEROY
coo nameplay. original in my eyes
Narc - You had a semi-consistant verse here. That smart ass wordplay impressed me. You had some nice punches. Flow was good. I thought you came just a tad bit harder then Kaoz in this one. An evenly matched battle. Good job guys. Keep battling and keep getting better!!
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