Voted For: Kordozar
You rappers ~need ta truly know~ RaDiKaL and how ~unbelievable he flow~//
while ~CeReBraL rudely shows~ how he 'WRECK KORD' and wont even ~'need a studio'~//
okay wordplay. but really..whats up with this style?
Yo fame is as small as ~1 syllable~ Ima ~come real wit you~ no ~ones feelin you~//
so if da ~son willlin to~, my lines'll 'CUT KORD' like 'FATHERS DO TO UMBILICALS'//
still..the style ruins your okay wordplay that doesnt hit as a punch
When dat weapon ~pop out~ you like a 'POLICEMAN LEAVIN' you ~'COP OUT'~//
so I'll easily take ya ~block out~ and my rhymes make 'K "OH" like a ~'KNOCKOUT'~//
wow..thats a punch, you make him say oh? really?
If u dont get help ~for those bars~ you'll get 'SMOKED' like ~'DIGOURNOS ARE'~//
leave u 'open 4 ways' like ~'4 door cars'~ ta show ya 'hard days are over' like '70 yr. ~porno stars'~//
omfg shut up
U're da ~fake of fakes~ I seen alotta wack MCs but like 'birthday cakes' u ~take da cake'~//
you was just ~mistaked for great~ so like 'CLUMSY DESTINY HOLDERS' I'll ~'BREAK YA FATE'~//
your meta's are straight herbin yo
I may not be a ~grown boy,kid~ but my rhymes never fail ta ~own whores,kid~//
so while you ~condone wars,kid~ I'll leave 'KORD TANGLED' like ~'PHONE CORDS IS'~//
finally. the pain is over
Rad - the only pain you brought was to the reader. This shit defined a newbie. Your structure is fucking horrendous. I wan to throw out my computer after that shit. ~dont write~ LIKE "ThiS!" Cause you suck ass if you do. Your metas were horrible and very basic. Flow was stretched. Nothing good from this verse. Elevate fast.
Coming To The Table With Nothin......And You'll Leave Empty Handed
Not Even A Rapper,Endorsed With M.ens C.ock Is The Only Mc Managed
a gay punch. only effective if clever, and this wasnt
I Seen Ya Latest Posts, All The Call-Outs Left You Frozen Solid
Cause You Been A Middle Wieght Longer Then.........Doug Dewitts
ok ok
Still Can't Throw A Punch.....Being Dope Thats False Accusations
Ugly Verse,No Wonder You Only Recieve Haunted House Applications
meh, okay
No Discussion Your Verse Is Played......... No Need To Fix It
Kid's Better Of Leaveing RV Since Most Of Radikals Dis-Missed
played wordplay. but u worded it wells o it hit. goodjob!
Kor - you came weak here. But you didnt need to come hard. A big mismatch in every category. It was a landslde. Your flow was good. Punches were ok but WAY better than his. So goodjob, you beat him with ease.
Hit this slept on battle up with a honest, explained vote! Thanks!
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