Flyweight
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IP:
This was a good piece that held descriptive content...great vocab & good flowing multis..The imagery was solid, which made ya complexity good & realistic..seeing how boxers fight so they kids can eat..as in this case..The idea was creative as well & held a mediocre depth toward the entire piece..
The only thing I didn't like is that you didn't elaborate on the topic..it's seems more like a good story that doesn't finish..I feel it would've been better if it was extended..but overall it was a nice piece..keep doing what you do
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