Voted For: Spoken Word

Spoken - This was a good drop. Not hall of fame..but not hall of shame. You came decent with imagery. Emotion could have been more present. But it was too dull. Vocab wasnt amazing either. You took an approach that is too basic in my eyes. Go within the topic and be creative. As a writer you gotta experiment to get better. But anways back onto the piece. Flow was good. Rhyme scheme was alright, kinda eh in some spots. You stayed on topic. Go deeper with your descriptions and try to use internal rhyming. Not a bad drop man.

B-MAC - Okay first off, your rhyme scheme messed this up horribly. You need to rhyme to make it flow. And your flow was effected the way you wrote this. The vocab wasnt great. Imagery was attempted but didnt help much. Emotion was very limited in this. You took a different approach but you didnt do it well. It was sorta clever but you didnt succeed in doing it. A very basic drop and it didnt earn the win. Sorry but you outmatched this time.

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