this piece was iight, woulda liked it if it was longer!....um ur structure was on point got good flow!.......ur multis was on point like whoa vocab u can up on that a little bit always room for elevation......pretty decent drom 6.5/10 fo sho....u told the story weird becuz it didnt seem to have an ending dont know what you were doin if u got bored or just ran out of rhymes......RTF ON MY SIG LINKS POSSIBLE A BATTLE SINCE I TOOK THE TIME TO ANALYZE URS