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Old 08-10-05, 02:27 PM   #35
taz
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Voted For: oreo

Structure-Gkillaz had nice structure had it flowin nice, oreo ur lines was mad stretched make each line end at the same point.up on that yo

Vocab-Oreo had better vocab, caught my eye a couple timies, but nothing special...gkillaz had poor vocab both up on that as ur verse goes on enhance ur vocab so it is more enjoyable to read...both up on that!

Multis-Both really lacked multis nothing appealing to my eye in this catergorie at all...both up on multis u 2 should no better, no hate yo

Personals-Oreo Had better personals that weree more plain to see....Gkillaz ur personals werent appealing nor noticable man up on that fo real.

Punches-Oreo had better fresher punches that hit hard fa sho man....Gkillaz when u throw a punch make sure it actually hits ur opponent, no hate just stating true feedback!.....

Originality-Oreo had tight fresh verse everything was tight about it except structure, Gkillaz had only the good flow going for him wasnt feelin his disses yo

V/oreo

RTF if you would, sincce i took the time to peep ur battle.