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Old 08-10-05, 03:55 PM   #38
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Voted For: taz

Vote Taz.. u got some good flow and rhymes in.. your structure looks solid especially for writing it so fast.. only thing i didnt like is how ur used same words twice a couple times.. like rhymes.. murder.. and rap.. but overall the flow was better than killas..
killas verse lost me and it looked like he found a rhyming word and wrote anything about it..

vote taz
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