Voted For: M.A.F.i.A
Ha ha...try to come in here...swingin to start fightin....
i "de-baited" the fish hook...this dumb fucks still "bitin"....
^^good wordplay and all....but where's the punch?...1/10
when I spit this…he will try to remember how to spit back…
Beatin me ? bouts as much chance as getting an elephant through a cat flap…
^^unoriginal........2/10
i tapped on his shoulder...sign on his brain said " out of order ...
too busy trying to put MnMs in alphabetical order"...
^^Played out since the early 90's.
niggers out of breath...end of this he will be dead...
decievin name...this cunt couldnt lie str8 in bed...
^^weak.......2/10
this whores gettin served for chattin like a certified vet...
comin in with "hi im a fuckin herb, i havent posted yet"...
^^weak...2/10
Whole verse was weak man.Flow and structure was ite.No much of a problem there.But punches lacked.That brain outta order/M&M's line..I can't believe you spit that.That's been played out since the early 90's.I first heard that in elementary.Be creative next time.
ta define ur skill mayne, its gangsterly impossible/
Your raps are more cartoony that "KIM STOPPABLE"/
^^Terrible...terrible....0/10
dont fuck around, dont even try ta step wit me fool/
Ill dround u in less than 10 seconds in my swimming pool/
^^No punch...0/10
Tool u up, hammer u up leave traces all across you/
COPS still find ur body but dont appear to give a fuck about u/
^^flowed bad...weak punch....1/10
UR rhymes, still stand undefined/
dont know why, i try, keep wastin my time/
^^No punch...0/10
Battelin ur ass just dont seem right/
u beat me once, aint goin down again/
^^ugh...don't bring up him beating u...1/10
Cuz ur rhymes are inreadable alls i recieve is tention/\
So know im tha best and next time pay attention/
^^no punch...self glorifing...2/10
OK...had too many killin/violence threats and self glorifing.Just diss.It's ok to use the threaths and glorifing as filler or set-up...but not as a punch.And the actual punch you had were whack.You can't just go stating stuff and expect to get a reaction.Be indirect
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