Voted For: Kordozar

You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
^^OK.......5/10
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
^^Ok....coulda been better....4/10
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
^^Good....6/10
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
^^meh...weak....3/10
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
^^OK......4/10
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
^^no punch...horrible closer...1/10

OK...kinda boring verse man.1st punch was creative and hit well...and so did the 5-0 candle one.But the rest were just some mediocre punches.The closer was the worst...as it wasn't a punch.Work on your flow and set-ups.

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
^^weak punch.....2/10
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
^^Uncreative....2/10
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
^^set-up was bad and punch sucked....1/10
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
^^terrible......1/10
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
^^Finally a good line....5/10
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
^^c'mon.....1/10

OK...too simplistic.You need better concepts.Look at that last bar....he puts you to sleep?...terrible concept..the only decent line in your verse was probably the kors-light one.The others were basic and weak.Work on your complexity and using more personals.

Vote-kordozar
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