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Old 08-10-05, 08:00 PM   #1
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Voted For: Pair-A-Docks

lol.............hands down..................pair-a-docks took this and ran with it ......... intro was sick :
This kids brain must be off balance....by now he feels feeble....
If this kid was a sick bird....he still couldn't be...... ILL eagle....: funny line.. love the personal.......kinda went easier @ the end of ur drop tho... but u still get my vote over all u had a better drop.. good structure.. easier to follow flow.. alot more entertaining.. and piece of advise for Illegal don't use"//" try to set up ur lines differently.. u had good wordplay but didn't spend enuff time insulting your opponent... keep writing to both..... V/Pair-A -Docks
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