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Old 08-10-05, 08:28 PM   #13
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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

U'll be in Debt if you Bet against Narc in this Thread cuz Stanza ill "DIP thru ur SET"*
How you gonna hurt me when your Bitch Ass struggles to fucking "Break a Sweat"
6...ok play on his alias, although the 2nd line wasn't all that hot.
Dog you outta place why even try dont you know this aint good for your "Health"
I'll hold Onions to ur Face wit a Gun in ur Eye so you'll Cry at the "Sight of Death"
5...concept was ok, but you delivered it pretty weak.
Hold your Breath Stanza cause im bringing heat like the weather of the 'Tampa"
Going south like Atlanta and your rhymes are old so ill just call ur verse "Grandpa"
5...again, not the best here, you need to try rewording your shit.

OVERALL: 16/30



You Couldnt Take Me Down Even If You Controlled The Elevator
They Say Im Fabolous They Way I Stop Yo Breathe Like a Resperator
4...weak, played concept and you self-glorified a little with the faboulous concept.
I Think That You Sorry The Way You Talkin All That Babble
And No Action Taken So next Time Dont PM Me for a Battle
4...again, weak. not really a personal especially the 2nd line, that was just pointless.
Time To Stop Only 6 Lines Was Required For Me To Take The Cake
And Like Fat Bitchez Ya Strutures Comes In So Many Sloppy Shapes
5...better but still not worded for good affect, thats your problem you rush shit too much.

OVERALL: 13/30



weak drops from both, stanza you rushed yours and came with played concepts and weak shit, you need to take more time and try rewording shit better. also narc, you dropped better against me, so you need to get more creative and try wording shit better alos, but in this battle you came more consistent than stanza did.

V/ - NARC-UZI

plz RTF!! on my battle with marv....links in my siggy.
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