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Old 08-11-05, 09:59 AM   #10
Payn
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yeah i agree wit taz u got sum good vocab but ur structure was off & jus didn't flow dat well but continue 2 work on it get a lil mo creative wit ya pieces & guarantee u'll betta results fa sho

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