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Old 08-11-05, 03:37 PM   #8
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Voted For: taz

This dude lost his peace no he is forever whack
Nigga comes up to me askin for his peaceback*
^^comes up asking you?...give proof..or it's a fake personal...2/10
I aint got shit fo ya except a L in ya column
Ill teach ya how to rap make sure u buy all my volumes
^^didn't rhyme...self glorifing..no punch...2/10
You a newbie but aint new to me ill rip ya boy
Cats like you act a fool my bombs deployed
^^not much of a punch again...2/10
Your a lyrical disaster nigga im ya master bow down
You a bow wow look a like beat me sike laugh out loud
^^finnaly a punch...but weak...4/10
Cant beat me unless you cheat you a biting addict
Rapped for a month beat a couple a chumps now u back at it
^^he beat chumps?...post his battle records to prove it..4/10
Well i caught onto your cheating now slow ya role
Take ya ass back to ya house of crack says stone cold**
^^meh...ur best bar....5/10

Weak verse here Taz.I thought you were not dissing enough.That 1st bar...did he ask you that?If so...post a link...if he didn't...fake personal.2nd and 3rd bars were not punches...they were self glorifing.Focus on dissing.The other bars after were punches..but they were weak.But at least ya flow was ight.

Yo, you're just another victim by the name of Taz
I'm sending you to lyrical Alcatraz
^^flowed bad....weak and basic...1/10
You spin around pretenging to be a tornado
I'll stomp you on the ground like a ripe tomato
^^Not a punch...0/10
Squeeze your guts out make you bloody and Juicy
You're like Ricky ReTardo from I Love Lucy
^^basic....why is he like ricky?..say y...2/10
You're reduced to a storm but I'm the hurricane
while your boyfriends take turns on you running the train
^^c'mon...weak....2/10
This battle will be unlike your last bout
Cuz this time YOU'RE gonna get technically knocked out
^^not a punch....1/10
Call your aunty and your uncle, nephews and nieces
Cuz I'l rip you a new ass and tear you to "peaces"
^^*sigh*....not a punch...1/10
When I'm done, you'll be on a stretcher wishin
That I didn't just put you in the rap-Tazmission
^^weak...1/10
YOu're biggest mistake is my wrath you unleashed
Join the other losers cuz you've just been peaced
^^stop ...just diss....0/10

Ok...you had even more self glorifing that Taz did.About 90% of your verse consisted of it.And the punches you had...had no effect..they were weak.And some just came outta now where.LIke...why is he like that Ricky guy?Say why..don't just say he's like the ricky guy and end it.The Taz from wrestling was a good concept...but executed horribly.

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