lol dogs mans best friend ay?

lol anyway i was feelin this, nice imagery but you spell to much shit wierd like you rushed this to much, the emotion is very good, vocab could be upped, but i was still feelin this cuz you really have a nice imagery when you write, props to that keep writin man i'd like to see you write more but i feel that you record n wanna do that cuz i do too. lol anyway 1

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