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Old 08-11-05, 04:17 PM   #22
taz
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Voted For: Natural killa

I peeped ya shit..still ain't figured out which part was ya writtens
U gotta be kiddin, how da fuck u got more footnotes than actual disses
^If he has more footnotes post the link....or else its a fake personal^
In good faith, I set this battle up hopin' for a small challenge
Ya rhymes wack fuel economy, stretchin' em out to get dat extra mileage
^Didnt even rhyme man.....weak diss 2/10^
Addin' dashes and quotations don't make what you wrote dope or blazin
It just mean u a joke, so face it..ya whole M.O. is to hate, kid
^Not hard diss at all 4/10^
I'm an organic farmer harvestin' u herbs for this beef dish
I gave you all the ammo needed, u still couldn't defeat this
^Nice Punch, 6/10^
Instead you posted a thread thought you was revealin' a secret
But discovered you sonn'ed yaself when er'body called u a geek, bitch
^send proof link or else its fake personal 2/10^
Spittin' weak shit..what da fuck ur wack wit your anemic..
Flow-style broke-down schemes bitch..I'm rippin u into pieces
^not a strong punch dont know what u were doin1/10^
Knee jerk ya ass until you achieve this..level I'm at cuz u squeamish
Scared to step up or dream shit..ya self esteem is dead, it seems it
^weak....didnt really diss him 0/10^
Logical to think it..dat I'm reachin' farther than you can ever achieive prick
Believe it..local rule say I'm K.O.'n this fool, don't starve..just EAT SHIT!
^very weak closer...wasnt feelin it 3/10^

over all i think this was not very.....powerfull ur punches did not hit as hard...ur structure was good ur flow was on point but ur punches lacked hard hitting and rawness.!4/10

I ain't tryna knock,I'm stating facts,and i don't like battlin a fag dreamin bout bein on top a other cats
he lame,it's why nobody askin for a 'Q-Tip' cause he already drop a lotta 'wax'(whacks)
^good diss...nice multis 5/10
he denied the battle yesterday,accept 2day,c'mon Tha,grow some balls
cause,i mean, we all know how he 'pre-rights',like a four year old know it all
^haha nice diss, funny one too cuz i got 4 year old sister....6/10....nice comparison^
it should be a sin for you to bring the spit,& ya wanna put me under your wingjust to have something to stick
Bitch please,u only switched to gay,cause str8ness ain;t give ya anything to lick
^very weak....diddnt get it, ur structure was bad 0/10
damn model,checkin ya nose,askin bout our workout in LL,then stoppin to beg for a second to pose
and i hear U A VET?,well ya must owning only CD's cause you got no record to show
^not hard hitting just a basic punch 3/10^
i'm mad dat da first queer dat i saw got his temper unlocked,happened to be pussy in the center alot
and it's clear the change to homo ain't work,he still beatin his meat to member mugshots
^haha thats tight, nice punch 7/10^
only shots Q wants to do is ballin my mouth,talking about me ducking,but here he's stallin me now
cuz,i mean,look,he even gave ME props,makin a whole thread in LL about calling me out
^didn tlike it......show proof of him callen u out 3/10^
but it's sa'll good Q,take the losing as a quid-pro-pro,shoulda saved ya corpse with a no show
cause it figures you'd be whack,reppin benzino,with your aim as SOURCE CEO
^not really hard hitting, but kinda hard 5/10^
to me,this ain't beef,i think it's fun,bombarding a queer,wit his raps that stinks beyond some
but knowing you,sensitivity wieghts a ton,&you a 'dick-writer',like u substituting ink for cum
^hahha nice closer this right here won u the battle nice job 8/10

overall ur structure was fucked like crazy.........not good att all....couldnt get a good flow...but u had better punches and better personals that hit hard and were fresh and original nothing played at all...overall 6/10!...keep it up