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IP:
Word, That Kid Said Pretty Much Everything...
This Was Average...
Kinda Ghetto Ganstah/Suicidal Thoughts By B.I.G Type Drop...
Its Been Done, Tryn Get More Original Next Time...
Also You Vocabulary Is Very Weak...
Tryn Read Up And Increase That, It'll Do Alot For Your Work...
Helps Make Things Seem Alot More Original Aswell...
Uuuuum, Steady Flow...
Struture, Eeeeeh, I Dont Really Mind It...
But Rv Is Gonna Piss And Moan About It Alot...
So I'd Just Take The Extra Effort And Press Enter After "//"...
Sooooo Yup, Try Some Of That Next Time...
Please Return The Favor On Me And Vango's New Drop...
Called "Hallow Tips Pt. 2":
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ghlight=atticus
Thanks Alot Mayn, Stay Up...
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