Voted For: Law_Jr

This dude gets no pussy he has NO Fukin Game
When girls turn lesbian he always takes the blame
^Nice opener....5/10^
He's no competion jus a chip of the 'ol block
this battle will be stuffed away like old gym socks
^Nice comparison good diss fa sho 6/10^
Im'ing me askin 2 battle, dudes pretty desperate
Dont ask him about pussy cuz dicks his favorite
^extremely weak closer didnt even rhyme lol 0/10^

overall 5/10 ur rhymes need work, ur disses was iight fo the hole 6 lines u had....multis vocab was weak rhyme scheme wasnt that great...but better dan ur opponent

This Newb Accepted tha battle what the fuck was he thinkin
He Probably PMSin Cuz hiz Pussy Always Stinkin
^I dont think pussy's stink when u have pms...thats like yeast infection pal.....bad opener 3/10^
Dudes so fukin poor couldnt afford computer see
So when he wants to battle he goes to the library
^Ok diss not that hott....but iight 4/10^
This is just practice, cmon its business man
you will always find this nigga wit a dick in his hand
^better closer than ur opponent but not good enough 4/10^

over all 4/10 structure was not that great, make sure ur lines end up at the same point.....make sure ur disses actually dis sur opponent man.....

V/law_jr

please rtf since i took the time to analyze ur battle