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Old 08-11-05, 04:52 PM   #16
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Pretty Nice Drop Overall...

Storyline Was Good...
Structure, Emotion Was Real Nice, Imagery-Dope...

Your Flow, On Point...
One Thing About You I Never Used To Like...
You Flow Just Bord Me...

I Dunno, This Piece Held Me Though...
So Oviously You've Been Improving, Real Nice Mayn...

And You Do Have Multies...
You Had Some Long Ones At The End...
*Shrugs*, Maybe Just Use Internals Aswell...

Nice Overall Though...

Please Return The Favor On Me And Vango's New Drop...
Called "Hallow Tips Pt. 2":

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ghlight=atticus

Thanks Alot Mayn, Stay Up...
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