Voted For: NaRc-UzI

.These Guys Is SECOND-RATE Try 'n TEST-THA-GREAT? You'll Go OVER-AN-ESCAPADE, Let Me STRESS-YA-FATE Cuz Wit Skills i Know These "Cats Will Lack" Lyke OWNERS-OF-ESCALADES!!//
^^no.....2/10
..I'm PEELING-YA-SHOWS, Break Limbs So u Get No FEELING-U-HOES, We Tha ILLEST-U-KNOW? I'll 'Finger These Bitches' Just To Say Im "FEELING-THEIR-FLOW"!!//
^^played....1/10
..narc You'll Get A TASTE-OF-MAH-STRAP, Leave u Wit An ACHE-IN-YA-BACK, You 'Ballin' So Much On This Site I'ma Put Ya FACE-ON-MY-'SACK'!!//
^^not even a punch....0/10
.. uzi I'ma Put u In A HEARSE-'N'-CASKET, When My Guns Start BURSTIN'-N-CLAPPIN', Ya HURTIN',-BASTARD i Feel Like u 'Need-Scars', Feeding Me 'Sweet-Bars' It Ain't Ya Fault Ya Mom Gave BIRTH-TO-A-FAGGOT!!//
^^lmao...this was so stupuid...1/10
..We DIMINISH-YA-REPLIES, That's All Yall Got? We'll Leave Blood on Ya Faces So We'll REFINISH-YA-EYES, Leave Yall Speakin'.. FINISH-SAYING-BYE, Like Mortal Kombat Watch Us "FINISH-THESE-GUYS"!!//
^^NO...2/10

OK...first things first...stop with the capital and (") to your multis.And..i suggest you stop tryna use multis as a whole.It ain't working for you.They were as forced as it can get.None of your punches hit.All were lines that were either weak or not a punch at all.Work on everything.

Its obvious that i got wayne in a "Clutch" thats why im "Breaking his Neck"
Wayne and his crew can go "Dutch" and still wouldnt be "Splitting the Check"*
^^OK...set-up bad...3/10
Homie ur a No Name u could beat "Pac Man" and still wouldnt have "No Game"
Youll be living in Pain cuz Ill take the "Bat Man" and procced to "Bruise Wayne"**
^^Good wordplay/personal....8/10
You used to be a "Living Legend" now ur in the "military" but u aint a "Threat"***
Ur leader changed his name to "Sixth Sense" so he can see u after ur "Dead"****
^^DOPE.....8/10
You beatin me is like "Yao Ming" giving a "High Five" to that midgit "Gary Colman"
In this battle your like an "Uncoftorable Shoe" cause im talking your "Sole Man
^^hmm..Ok...5/10

Ok...the middle bars got this for you easy.One thing tho...work on your set-ups.And don't use the (").DIdn't really need to explain shit either.Flow stayed on point through the whole verse.Structure was good.Personals hit.

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