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Old 08-11-05, 05:56 PM   #32
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Natural killa


detrimental:
Natural Killa look like he just learnin to rap 1.
Says he's here to kill when he's never heard of a gat 2.
^^^VERY BASIC..NOT A GOOD OPENER...U CAN KILL PPL WITHOUT A GAT FAM LOL
Your life is this website man you ugly as a sin
You're probably mad cuz nothin blows you but the wind
^^^DIDN'T LIKE DA FLOW ON DIS 1...PUNCH WAS DECENT COULD OF BEEN WORDED BETTA
He's fake he just claims the cliq he's hangin with 3.
Trigga Town? ya'll aint down with the bangin shit 4.
^^^WHERE'S DA CREATIVITY FAM???
You're a hatin bitch and you wonder why we hatin you
Have to tie food to your neck so dogs play with you
^^^U SERIOUS?????...DIS IS SOME LIL KID SHIT
We can safely assume you probably think you're fresher
But takin my lyrics is the only way you'll sell a record
^^^^NO
You must be stupid, beating me will always be a wish
So from that your IQ must be as small as your g/f's tits
^^^^NO AGAIN
This battle is a prime example of how far your wishin gets
Messin with me leaves your record like the system guest's 5.
^^^SYSTEM GUEST LINE HAS BEEN USED LIKE 1000 TIMES ALREADY
Pathetic, you'll probably dick ride if worse comes to worse
This a mans game, next time you step take off your skirt
^^^WEAK CLOSER..

natural killa:
i'll give him some scars and a note,while this bitch tries to be hard with a pose
and his name's death-try-mental(name),cause he's like a retard with a rope
^^^WHUT????...SHOULD OF EXPLAIN DIS SHIT
so I be at your crib,perspiring you mother,while you at school,firing some butter
n your rhymes are maid as F-rest(fresh),as some aspiring butlers
^^^LMAOOO WHUT DA FUCK IS DIS...DA MULTIS IS GOOD BUT U AINT MAKIN NO SENSE
count on me to deliver the bomb apropos,n watch it blow,soon as ya mom looks down below
n i'm bein real when i say....what real emcee comes from "Akron,Ohio?"
^^DECENT PERSONAL
battle a kid whose comments repatee's nerd?,and his career is conferee'd cursed?
and he ain't creative,nah,this bitch named himself after an SAT word
^^^^?????????????????????????????????????????
a brat behind guys,might as well hold up the sign,admit,you deliver the fries
you re-hearse(rehearse) that verse more times than a cat with 9 lives
^^^^WEAK....LOL I KNOW WHO U ARE NOW FAM
PMS'n crazily,flippin on people,in a legit paging,and no doubt,you in a pre-writ staging
but you don't really diss-guys(disguise)well,like untrained secret agents
^^^DOPE LINE...NEVA SEEN DIS BETTA THAN DETRI'S WHOLE VERSE
in the middle of the night,this cat gets caught tight,and board wide
n c'mon,look at his user title,kid can't even spell "thoughts" right*
^^^OKAY CLOSER...HE DID CHANGE IT THO....

DIS BATTLE HAD A WHOLE BUNCH OF DUMB LINES...BUT NATURAL PULLED IT OUT WITH DAT DISS-GUYS LINE...AND HE HAD SOME CREATIVITY...DETRI HAD NO CREATIVITY IN HIS VERSE NO LINES STOOD..YEAH U HAD PERSONAL CONCEPTS ABOUT HIM BUT U MADE DEM REAL WACK
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^^he's scared.lol
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