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Old 08-11-05, 07:04 PM   #3
Dirty Nigga
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It was aight, not really my thing, Kinda too deep for my old ghetto illiterate ass

good vocab tho, Imagery in the peice was top notch, Not sure many people will leave feed on this 'cause of the choice of topic.......But it was cool, Nothin much i can fault on the peice besides the fact it could of been maybe 4-6 lines longer, wasnt feelin the way you finished the peice, still dope tho....Good enjoyable deep read....keep doin your thing man....8/10 for this..

Peace shorty..
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