Voted For: Natural killa

Structure-Natural killa, had better flow, ridicule....flow was kinda off....didnt feel it...up on making ur liines end up near eachother....

Vocab-Natural killa, had better vocab, went nicely with his verse was feelin it...Ridicule, ur verse had plain and simple vocab wasnt feeling thta at all...up on that...try enhancing ur vocab as ur verse goes along

Personals-Thought Ridicule had better personals than Natural Killa.....thats about that

Punches-Natural killa had better punches.....more fresh original stuff than ridicule, ridicule didnt feel ur verse was as hard hitting has naturals

Multis-Natural killa...HAd better multis but with his multis he added enhanced his vocab....very nice job killa, ridicule didnt feel ur multis was hott.

Originality-Natural killa had original hott verse....which was eye appealin the whole verse....Ridicule...ur structure is eye soring try and fix that up a bit

V/NATURAL KILLA

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