Voted For: taz

Mel cant peep my sh*t dont swear he has virgin eyes*
After my 10 lines this cats L column will be devirginized
^^not much a punch here....2/10
His personals are swarmed wit lies he dont know me
Wit guys he gets cozy sO wit girls he gets lonely
^^WITH girls he gets lonely?..make no sense..2/10
Im battelin a true newbie who the fuck you be?
He talkin bout guns but he dont have ballz ta shoot me
^^man...this was weak...3/10
He from rb now he rv tryna get the sites conjoined
Well this cat met his match, im his melting point
^^not much of a punch....2/10
Cant mess wit a dude like him cuz him being gay is likely
He standing on the corner fuckin dudes on the nightly
^^basic...gay jokes gotta be creative as it's likely been done before...4/10

Ok...your verse didn't have enough str8 punches.It was more of self glorifing.Some,like the 2nd bar,didn't make much sense...as you said..he gets lonely around girls?If you said angry it woulda made sense.But lonely?

I'll put it like this u never had it, so put away the gimmicks
taz elevating.......... nah! the sky's past your limit
^^hmm....Ok i guess....5/10
This text shit ain't for you, but I'ma still get down to biz yo
Punches will cause this faggot to subside................
.......................................... he'll prolly go to Quiznos
^^NO....2/10
Mel is past average and better than you, taz eluding the clues
Man you gotta dress to kill................. I guess text ain' suited for you
^^NO....basic rhyming here too...2/10
I'm abusive so true, calamities hurting this herb
U ain't a straight forward MC................ to win, I think your purpose is curved
^^zzzzzzzzz.....2/10
These irritating heads, I'ma kill these fleas, while your skill is seized
Beat the skin of ya bitch as....................
..................................taz still would'nt appeal to me
^^^not much of a punch...1/10

Man..aside from the 1st bar...there wasn't much in that verse I was feeling.I suggest some better wordplay and metas and such.I think you need to ease up on the dots.That only works if done correctly...which you didn't.


WEAK BATTLE HERE!!
Vote-Taz