Voted For: Reflekt

Loud mouth muffucker im here to stop these lames,
if u a gangsta muffucker im bout to check u like a hockey game
^weak opener...had bad flow to it 3/10^
Its no love bitch yea im disrespectin ya ass,
u prolly had a shitty child hood i cud tell cuz ur rymes r REFLEKTIN ur past.
^Bad personal....didnt really hit hard at all 2/10^
This kids a young buck, let alone a dumb fuck,
and u garbage muffucker soo u get taken out in a dump truck
^Basic rhyme scheme lack of wordplay 1/10^
If the call gets made to take u out im tha shooter,
cuz my gunz constantly got hands on'em like tha mouse on a computer
^Not a bad reference....good comparison....good diss 5/10^
When we fight bitch dont worry bout wut im holdin on me,
i guess battlin new jacks gets this kid feelin good like he rollin on E
^what? didnt make sence nor contributed to ur verse 1/10^
wen we done his eyes el b to swollen to see,
he wants to b a rapper but a bitch is wut hes goin to be.
^Weak closer not good, easy rhyme scheme 2/10^

Over all ur structure is off point, try making ur lines end up at the same pont for better structure and better flow....ur rhyme scheme was basic...up on ur vocab to enhnace the flow/verse itself....and make sure ur verse has multis....so it also enhances ur verse

you standing in my way..the only thing thats tryna hinder
me..so when im done my lyrics leave .da illest injer(injured)
^Nice opener....4/10^
your 10 posts that you did is the closest you'll ever come to being perfect
cause dudes punches are slow to connect like dial-up service
^very nice diss...hard hitting, liked it a lot 6/10^
gettin pm's from u sayin check in..ho gimme a second
wanna test this?..but you only fire blanks like ya record*
^ok diss, was iight simple rhyme scheme 5/10^
man you nothing to me..you might got 50 cents..but thats only a lil bit
the only things to come outta jersey are big headed lil kidd's**
^HAHA made me laugh nice punch right here 8/10^
im like a mc doctor if ya peep the way my lyrics tear through your anatomy
your verse is nothing but littered with more filler than a mouth infested with cavities
^Good comparison nice job on this 5/10^
now when da illest jumps off stage is the only time they ever turn you up
why bother with new jersey?..when miami already burned you up***
^Good reference it hit hard and nice closer 6/10^

Over all, i liked this...but work on your structure to get each word end up at the same point at the end of one line, up on ur multis so it makes ur verse flow better and just be more enjoyable to read....ur vocab can be upped but it was ok in this becuz u had hard hitting punches

V/REFLEKT

RTF since i was kind to peep and analyze yours