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Voted For: Ridicule
suffocating as i'm braiding out ya air,ya fading outta here,as i spit my innuendo array
cuz he's about as close to a young profit(prophet) as nintendo is today**
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Sorry man but that line sucked IMO...it was a decent attempt I saw the fact it was hard to try
i bet a rich boy like you feels rebelious and intellectual for one liter-a-chore(literature)
but after this battle,your stuck staring at the sky like TuPAc in ya signature
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Ok wheres the punch...but good wordplay..that was ok
crying for the nurse tattle,cuz it's his 1st battle,n he's gonna buffet the best born
but he's a rook-key trapped,like someone locked away the chess board
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PLAYED....so many chess lines its crazeee
but ok
10 bars off the top,'s all it took,like old books,we'll just put you on the shelf
could be another Miss Cleo,cuz ya name tells us what ya verse gon do to yaself
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haha I liked this...nice line...1st one i rlly felt
ya lost ya 1st quick like sonic,n ya now listened to the chronic,like ya shocks stay full
ya dumbass is clueless,shit,ya's behind times like giving the clocks anul
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GOOD...best line of ure verse...a pretty bad verse from the beggining but then the last 2 bars were hot ill give you that
Overall
5/10
work on ure punches
Dawgs been talking, that a textie be gettin whored by an audio head
So I went over,took a look…….lines that resemble u,just to overfed
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sorry dude didnt like the line
Stopped in his tracks cuz you got chewed up and spat back down under
Battles which u cud have neva won,taz has been renown for herb asunder
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liked the wordplay...good diss...good punch
How the fuck u here to kill us because u can’t beat us went ur knocked out
Getting beat by cartoons,audio n even da blind,is nothing im shocked about
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Yo ure new good try but this didnt work
This fags rhymes all recycled,so stay away, he aint safe for the envirement
Cuz he's gonna be like former boxers "Trinadad" going into Retirement
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Good shit there...see the punch
Been banned by Vets and beat by newbies,cuz in a few months that’s occurred
And hows ya music gonna go far, when even your Ma doesnt want you to be heard
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decent punch...complex but decnet
6/10....
Decent shit...you get this IMO...you had the punches...you had sum good lines but still elevation is needed
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