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Voted For: Young Blaze
Young Blaze took this with ease no question.......
Structure: Young Blaze
Flow: Young Blaze
Word play: Young Blaze
Multis: Young Blaze
Personals: only one and it too was from Young Blaze
PhreeNapdizzle -- advise: don't use "/" played out find a new structure, forget about telling us how great u are work on insulting ur opponent in the flow.. that goes to you to young blaze you did that a couple of times.. but it just tied very well so its ignored. . . Futhermore: just go and tell me.. "here! little hill billy, sin!"/
how.much.would-you give me if i let my willy win..: very preschool looked like you were just trying to rhyme.... sound 50 centish and taht very preschool . . . you could have said peter pper picked a peck of peppers and i would have given you more credit.... i aint trying to hate im trying to stop u from doing the same thing on ur next battle... also creativity is lacked in your verse... wordplay. . .puns... jokes... have your audience think alittle... make sure you flow is easy to follow cause many ppl on RV as soon as shit don't flow they don't even finish ur verse . . . .so work on those things keep writing and good luck to both
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 just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . .  or u just gonna make me laff
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