Voted For: Ridicule

lol.. okay this was a very weak battle.. seriously

Ridcule: okay.. verse is below average... well average atleast since there was personals.. your punches were okay.. it was really confusing.. n a punch shouldt be hard to understand if it was good.. so yea.. work on that.. strucutre. blah.. flow was blah.. basiclly elvate on battling.. 4/10

Natural:
your verse was basiclly same. your structure is blah.. flow is blah.. the lines on ur verse n his is way too long.. try to make it shorter as if it was a real live battle.. punces were softer that water man.. barely tapped him.. n vice versa for him.. elevate on everyting..

overall: ya got potential.. jst dont try so hard.. if u do than nothing good will come out.. well ya.. elevlate on everything

vote: ridicule.. was all same.. but fact he had better personals..