Voted For: .Merkage.

Structure-Both had bad structure, cant vote on this catergorie both up on structure and make ur lines end up at the same point, cant stress that enough.

Vocab-Niether had appealing vocab, both should up on vocab as ur verse goes along...makes it more appealing to the eye....

Punches-.MERKAGE., had better punches...more fresh punches that hit harder, law ur punches were sorta played i wasnt feelin them....make sure ur punches actually hits ur opponnet

Personals-Best personal has to be from merkage first 2 lines...sick...keep that up homey practically won u the battle....didnt see much from law....up on that homey do you want to win?

Multis-Niether had appealing multis to my eye...multis helps the flow and makes it more appealing to read....both up on that.......

Originality-.merkage. was more original and fresh...verse law i didnt think urs was so original had very basic rhyme scheme....keep it up and shit.....

V/.MERKAGE.

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