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Old 08-11-05, 09:58 PM   #7
Paranoid
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Originally Posted by taz
Ur rhyme scheme was sorta basic u could use more multis structure was ok.....flow was tight......u told the story nice....great job guys 7.5/10.......rtf on my battles~!~

for some reason i dont believe you read our om cuz you say u who are you directing that too?

anyway thanks people for the feed and word trip.

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