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This was a pretty dope drop..i was really feeling it...structure was good..wordplay and vocab was okay..it could have been alittle better it was a little simple to me..but it was good...your feeling and emotions were good ..and i was also feeling your imagery i was really liking the peice..felt it could have been alittle longer..but it was a good drop..keep it up L.I
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