Voted For: Moral

Flaw verse
ok well your stucture and flow is good, but shit you are not creative at all, you came weak with punchlines, some lines just wasn't really gettin either, you need to get creative man you need to lay down soem personals as well to make it seem more like your actually dissing him, but anyway keep elevatin 1

Moral: hmm not bad a lot of your lines i wasn't gettin, a lot of your lines was mixed like lines that shoulda been metas were similes, some that were suppose to be similes metas just not really workin there, but anyway you had more creativity then your openant and thats why i choose to vote for you.

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