Voted For: Moral

Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral
This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil
^^didn't rhyme and punch was shit...2/10
I would call you an: ass: but that we already know
Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows:
^^basic and whack....2/10
Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar:
Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw:
^^didn't rhyme and punch sucked..c'mon..2/10
And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W:
Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you
^^Common said get off RV?...2/10

Weak verse here.A lot of your bars ain't even rhyme man.Moral/tiol....bar/raw...shit doesn't rhyme.And what's with that last bar...common neva uttered the word RV...so what the fuck you talking about?

Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems
It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim
^^system lines are played and no punch...1/10
Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number
You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under
^^IP #'s can be changed...weak...2/10
6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word
Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb
^^Weak...2/10
For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows
Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose
^^meh...3/10
Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me
All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski
^^Played...3/10

OK...weak verse again...I think the 2 of you need to work on wordplay and metas.Shit was whack.But since the punches sucked on both sided...I'll base it on flow and structure...so moral gets it

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