Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT...
that fake quote,would probably work better when named.
^^whack....2/10
that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope...
yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope.
^^Meh...Ok...5/10
and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in...
nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence.
^^didn't rhyme well..basic...3/10
westside till you die,then after this you are midwest...
no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset.
^^weak...what the hell?...3/10
Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?...
shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez.
^^Meh...w/e...2/10

Damn...this verse was weak man.I'm just being honest here too.No wordplay....just you stating some shit.Flow was choppy...I mean...rhyming reppin-in with excellence?...NO...make it rhyme better.Poor attempt at slant rhyming.Work on punches.

Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''*
''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar!
^^bars relating to rap and drinks are played..2/10
battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline
0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time!
^^good personal....6/10
we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses''
he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His
^^basic....3/10
First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz''
ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN''
^^OK....5/10
if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs
..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs
^^meh...w/e...4/10
I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids
only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids
^^OK....5/10
Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow''
shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now
^^Ok...6/10

OK...an ite verse.Just stop with all the (").Just looks annoying and fucks up the structure.Had some personals.But the reason you got this battle is for actually having punches that hit unlike indeph.

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