ok.....definitely better than your 1st drop....you gotta work on your flow though...and your delivery...try puttin emphasis on your lines....get into your words....the lyrics were pretty decent...quality is better than the 1st drop too......

so things you need to work on...mos def your flow...its not bad to start out with....

Delivery....get into your shit man....

lyrically its pretty good...but theres always elevation room there for everyone...

but...keep it up....and youll be doin good in not too long...just keep workin at it

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