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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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man this was stock full of emotion, imagery was great also, very emotional story, flow and structure were good which made it even better, it was long but stayed on focus and didn't hinder it any, very good read man, keep it up man
please RTF on one of my om's, links are in sig, again great job, keep em coming
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i come from a time when you earned respect,
for your rhyme and the way you made words connect,
not the money that you made or the girls you sexed,
a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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