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Voted For: Moral
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FV---Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral
This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil<<<Weak opender and a punch that is below par and bad set up all around..
I would call you an: ass: but that we already know
Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows:<<<congrats you just complemented him..(you said he could flow)
Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar:
Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw:<<,not bad not bad at all......
And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W:
Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you<<<<<Whoa terrible.......cheap blow with a weak punch.................
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Moral----Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems
It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim<<<not bad just dont call him weak names...
Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number
You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under<<<<very good punch and origional.....
6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word
Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb<<<<<not bad here good double meaning...nice punch all around
For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows
Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose<<<<<made me laugh...good punch also
Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me
All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski<<<<whoa not good.....the feeling was off in this one didnt like it at all....
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OK Flow Verse, why did you only do 8 lines???.....in a battle may i suggest that you do the maximum amount....and oh yeah try to mix it up with metas and multies and keep the structure good.....and work on your punches ALOT...
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Moral---you need to elevate i sence that you were forcing your punches instead of letting them connect and flow the right way....most of your verse was good....but that last line was terrible...in my mind a newbie could have came up with that one.....but any way both of you dont force it let it flow......cause you are as good as your last battle...and nobody wants an L
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