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Old 08-12-05, 11:51 AM   #1
Kautious
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Voted For: Ridicule

flow an structure - ridicule
he came with an easier read verse an set ups that fit the rhyme scheeme betta

natural your bars were all connected an it didn't make it hard to read it jus made it look more like a keystyle but the chooped wordplay lines you had wasn't kicking it

punches an personals-ridicule
ridicule came harder with set ups an punches , his closer was funny . i thought ridicule had the better of this battle.
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