Flyweight
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IP:
This piece has an easy going flow..content was decent...vocab was mediocre...hook can be catchy if heard enough times..this would be a good track if you get ya elements straight in audio...
Only flaws I can see is..the fact that toward the end..you kinda strayed off the topic..didn't really seem like you were talkin about 'no snitchin'..plus ya repetitive use of 'nigga' & guns really took away from its potency
Overall, this was a good piece..only thing I can say to improve on..is creativity & vocab to intensify ya content..Not tryin to knock ya..just letting ya know my opinion..anyways, keep doing what you do
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