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cot damn this was long as hell, break it up next time so its easier to read lol. but this was real good. i could really see what was goin on. you had a straight flow and structure was on oint obviously. maybe put some metaphors in there to make it more interesting. but it seemed pretty thoughtful. i give it an 8.5/10
holla at me and RTF...links in the sig
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