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Old 08-12-05, 02:15 PM   #1
chip
pain is weakness leaving the body
 
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24 hours left to live

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even though some people hated on this cypher, i thought it was a cool idea.
i wrote about what i would do with a day left to live. hate it or love it leave feedback:

if i had but 24 hours left to see
i'd make sure all of my enemies lie next to me
think of the right words to say when i see my mother
i'd kiss my girl on the cheek, let her know that i love her
give her a couple hours, i would be her perfect lover
give all my money and rhyme books to my sisters and my brothers
contemplate the deeds of my life as i take my last gasp
and watch the clock, waitin' for my last hour to pass
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