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Old 08-12-05, 02:35 PM   #29
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Voted For: Hitchcock

J.TERROR
No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in
But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin"
^nice word play, was feelin it 7/10^
You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance
And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants"
^wasnt feelin this more self glor. 3/10^
Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot
rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups
^Nah weak punch....didnt really rhyme 2/10^
And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani
Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety
^Ok vocab but again those words dont rhyme well....and it was more self glor.0/10^
Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies
And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money
^Good, reference felt it nice closer 4/10^

Hitchcock
You nice? i wouldnt say thats true
Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews
^Nice punch i was feelin it good flow 6/10^
You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see
Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV
^ooooo,nice dice yo.....good reference 7/10^
You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga
He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga
^Nice punch...nothing too special4/10^
You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it
Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven
^Haha nice diss yo like this one...5/10^
Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast
A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass....
^Awesome closer was fealin it 6/10^

Over all hitchcock came with harder punches that wear more appealing and able to see.J.terror had good wordplay and better structure.But hitchcock took it away with his hard hitting punches in almost everyline....cant beat good punches
V/HITCHCOCK

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