Voted For: Affliction

Your a fucking joke, like your name you just a con
He all talk but no action, when it goes down
.................................................I n panties he runs
^^didn't rhyme....3/10
My punches will make you bleed, so the bull wont duck you
Kid wants to battle jack the ripper, cause his
...........................................Hormone s was going crazy dude
^^OK...coulda been better....5/10
If you had your alias name, you still wouldnt see sickness
and if you win this battle, it only mean you in the
.................................................. .....Prostitution business
^^HMM...ok.....6/10
Look at his OM you can tell his punches arent tight
Brush your teeth barbie tooth paste is the only time you spit nice
^^the 1st line was nice..but 2nd wasn't...4/10
Since you aint on your alias name no more, your punches is not in effect
Your punches dont connect like a broke 1-800 collect
^^???????????....4/10

Ok..a bunch of mediocre punches here.Structure was good.Flow was off as u didn't rhyme some parts and had a lil too much filler.Ur personals coulda hit better.Like the Jack the Ripper one.Some lines were played like the spit nice and 1800-Collect,

like un-seen paint-cans drop from roof top building,
i'll fuck u'r day up w/ an on-top hit that'll crack ya frame like show'in a naked pic to ya moms about her gay children.... 1
^^Horrible....2/10
raps my addiction... battles skills u have are all fiction
my bitches i'll chop ya penius off.. then blame her A_dick_tion....(adiction) 2
^^No...awful wordplay..1/10
ya need to build up ya skills or get filled up with steel,
that'll drive a hole deeper in ya then oil-drills,
plus u'r erotic hit feels, like a preteen massage'in tits befor Da blow-up-doll-fill's....3
^^zzzzzzzzzzzzz...1/10
u'r fake spits, make shit, look like ya saliva came from a crayola-paint-set,
ya verse almost had me like a precher who seen a saint scrips ready to Faint-quick 4
^^Wtf?...2/10rip ya face with a blade N toss aicd till ya skin fade-away,
only reason u'll be here longer, cuz he stuck on the net serchin for hes flow-like-tidle-wave 5
^^NO...1/10


Man...horrible.first..stop with the weird structure..type ya verse normal.2nd..stop saying shit just because they rhyme.That'd get you nowhere.And where are your personal?I saw some wordplay..but it was embarrasing.

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