aight, rtf ... good beat choice, ya mic seems like tha volume is too high tho, seem like u havent been practicing too long, but a real vibe to you, u aint tryin to b what ur not, thats a good start, just need to develope ya flow with experience ya kno? ur off to a good start here no doubt tho, just keep doin u n keep grindin... in time every1 developes...no hoook? theres a big gap here... fill that baby in, wait, mayb there is nothing lol, so far a minute of just the beat runnin on, should have cut it out afta ya verse, but good start man, now build off that!

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