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Old 08-12-05, 08:52 PM   #19
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hmm,....i kno i can't vote but heres my take
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headgames,some real original concepts but some were
on the weaker side of the witty meter if ya nah sayin
2nd last bar was one of my favourites...
overall good verse for consistentcy n wordplay was well worded
along with your punches actually being very direct in most cases.
good verse........ good creativity.
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marv,flow was choppy in areas, some punches were ok but stretched out
way to far to be effective, you seem to put to much filler into your
verse to keep the reader interested throughout ya bars n verse..
alot of ya concepts are played n recycled n flipped but still recognizable
n do not have a witty apeal to them any more....
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headgames easily took this imo........pc
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!